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Me

I. Seen

Hips and breasts
Long thighs

Blue eyes
yellow near the pupil
small sun beams
dead in day dreams

Technicolor hair
pink black brown
purple tendril down
above the nape

White skin freckled
Buttocks dimpled
near the base of the spine

Curves
Calculaic arc
Ellipses, cirlces
ovals, ovaries

II. Sex
                                Woman
Lesbian
                                Double X's
Double lips
                                Womb-birth
Surrogate
                                Bleeding
Bled
                                Beaten
Outlawed

III. Touched

Glasses
Khaki bucket hat
Pants with a thousand buttons
Pink shoes
Pink cell phone
Pink pillows
Purple sheets
Japanese lunch kit
Black and white stuffed animal collection
-- zebras, snow tigers, pandas --
Crumpled cigarettes
Austrian bread bag
Piles of laundry
Lost socks
Twenty dice
Purple 11 inch vibrator
-- unused --
Twelve lamps
Open windows
Fans always blowing
Wind
The air breathed
Water drank
chocolate chips
Chocolate on lips
Smiles

IV. Scars

Right foot
Ball, beside the big toe
Two inches
Bottle cap ripped
Tripped in garbage
at age two

Lucky Seven
amalgamation of scrapes
on both knees
Clumsy kid
Running too fast
for pigeon-toes
turned ankles

Third scar
the latest
              the last
marks a passage of burning
press
             push
                        in
                               your fingers
feel the slicked over tissue
three inches
              smoothness of moist muscle
                       rough circle
              smoothness of
ending
Meh. Had this in the works for a while.
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retrodude88 Featured By Owner May 3, 2004
Wow, this is pretty cool, very daring of you to present yourself in a poem like this, I would do this but there wouldn't be much to write, lol.
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devious-smile Featured By Owner May 3, 2004   Writer
LOL You should do it anyway. BUt I forgot something. THE TATOOOO.

I always forget it's there. Like...a little sister. Hehehe
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southern5footer Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2004
this is fabulous. so unique- so perfect.. OMG I love it
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devious-smile Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2004   Writer
Hehehe Thanks so much!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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southern5footer Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2004
anytime. :hug:
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poeticprincess20 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Writer
Awesome poem. Tis very well put and very well written :+fav:
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devious-smile Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Writer
Thanks!!!
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poeticprincess20 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Writer
Your welcome
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theunwarymariner Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004
this feels so honest, i love it. it seems very at peace with who you are and that's as fantastic as it is rare.
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devious-smile Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2004   Writer
Hahah thanks! Maybe it's just slow-simmering egotism? Who cares! *lights up a cigarette*
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